In my opinion they could maybe get a little more for TVR but i don't know. he would get to play with his brother though
Well, i guess the TVR thing could be expansion draft related. Also, the Darling rights trade looks pretty good i guess. i like the lineup too.
So there are a few things i disagree with, like i think it's time to trade Crawford, but overall, it's pretty good.
I'll give you 4 stars.

DeBrincat will not be on the 4th line he scored over 60 goals in junior this season, where is Pokka? Panik will want more he's a 20 goal scorer these year. Glass isn't an NHL back-up, Kempny isn't getting into the top 4 after routinely being a healthy scratch this season, he's probably gone. No way the best line in hockey is getting broken up because of Shalunov.

I'm assuming by "rights to Scott Darling" you are referring to the Rangers buying the remainder of his current contract prior to July 1st in order to try to resign him. Darling is a UFA after his current contract, not a RFA.

I wouldn't concentrate too much on what line Brinxy will be playing, as Q will mix them up at will. I'm sure he will play on all 4 lines at some point.
Pokka might get traded for a backup goalie, if he won't make the lineup. Panik will be smart to sign with Chicago at discounted price, as he knows very well - chemistry is very important. He didn't get much success in Toronto or Tampa, and he must value playing with Tazer.
Kempny is not likely to be gone, he had some nice games and will be a nice fit to replace Rozy as #6 or 7 D.
Shalunov might replace Kane on second, or might play on first. I also wouldn't be surprised to see Panarin-Brinxy-Kane line at some point and Hartman-Anisimov-Hossa at some point. Q likes his blender.